Alright Emkay — let's do this.
Let's convert the first sentence from passive to active voice. The second sentence is already in active voice.
Step 1: Identify the passive construction in the first sentence.
Original: "Transparency, permission, and justice must ultimately be given top priority by banks and libraries in order to reduce ethical hazards."
The passive phrase is "must ultimately be given top priority by banks and libraries."
Step 2: Identify the agent performing the action.
The agent is "banks and libraries."
Step 3: Rewrite the sentence in active voice, making the agent the subject.
Banks and libraries must ultimately give top priority to transparency, permission, and justice in order to reduce ethical hazards.
The second sentence is already in active voice: "These organizations can fulfill their moral responsibilities while utilizing technology to efficiently serve their clients and consumers by putting strong regulations in place, encouraging diversity, and guaranteeing responsibility."
Here is the corrected sentence:
Banks and libraries must ultimately give top priority to transparency, permission, and justice in order to reduce ethical hazards. These organizations can fulfill their moral responsibilities while utilizing technology to efficiently serve their clients and consumers by putting strong regulations in place, encouraging diversity, and guaranteeing responsibility.
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