Paragraph Three- To get a 4/4 you need this paragraph. In this paragraph you have to connect the story to another text or the world. If you do this, make sure your conclusion is the last sentence in paragraph three, not the last sentence in paragraph two. -Name the text or world event -Use evidence from the story -Paraphrase evidence from the second source -Compare the similarities -Conclusion

Here's how to structure it:

1. Introduce the Connection: Begin by clearly naming the specific text or world event you will be comparing your story to.
2. Evidence from the Story: Provide specific details or examples from the story you are analyzing that relate to your chosen external text or event.
3. Evidence from the External Source: Paraphrase relevant information, themes, or events from the second text or world event that align with the story.
4. Compare Similarities: Explicitly discuss the parallels and connections between the story and the external source, highlighting how they share common themes, messages, or situations.
5. Conclusion: End the paragraph with a concluding sentence that summarizes the significance of this comparison and reinforces your main argument or insight about the story.